Crit Notes from my peers,

"Why stop at just plans, decide why you would just stop there."

"Floor plans on Tarp."

"Images in bags are confusing."

"Draw attention to detail in this building. Bring more attention to detail."

"Parctical Adhoc."

"Could be seen as a critical work."

"Not sure what im interested in. Grabable."

"Work on scale, push something further - One element."